A Dance
A couple gets lost in their relationship, neither able to find the other in their drowning heartache. Fred struggles about what to do with Gabby as she seeks freedom at the end of a road, without her medication. This story packs together the emotions of the two characters, and, in turn, captures a glimpse into the never-ending story of struggling love. A love that will never leave and never stay, and a love that is the largest truth of the human condition.
- Producer
Nathaniel Ramirez - Writer
John Tucholski - Director
John Tucholski - Cinematographer
Tilden Purdie Quang Vu - Editor
Tilden Purdie Quang Vu - Actors
Christian Maverick White Angelica Nambo-Palmeno
Craft and Heart
This one’s a masterclass in cinematography. Every frame feels intentionally composed, like each shot was handcrafted. Beautiful, warm and occasionally heartbreaking. It gives you space to feel the shifts in emotion. I also loved how the handheld and static shots play off each other, visually mirroring the character’s emotional turbulence. Sound design here is sharp. The mix is clean, the dialogue crystal clear, and the music choices boost the emotional stakes without ever overpowering the scene. Performances? All in. Every actor hits their mark, bringing a naturalness that pulls you deeper. The voiceover adds a layer of intimacy that carries the film’s emotional core. This film isn’t just skilled — it’s got a heart. A standout that shows you can marry technical mastery with genuine emotional resonance.
A Simple 2 Step
Good shot planning with effective edits. Lighting and sound didnt work. Characters not really developed. Lack of dialogue didnt help
Visually Striking and Emotionally Resonant
This film is beautifully shot—truly professional-level cinematography. Every frame feels crafted with care, right down to the title design and placement. The use of slow motion is effective and purposeful, and I was especially impressed by the thoughtful juxtaposition of handheld and static shots to reflect shifting emotions. The sound is clear and well-mixed, and the music choices elevate the emotional weight of each scene. The performances are stellar across the board, and the voiceover is tender, well-written, and deeply moving. This is a film that feels emotionally powerful from beginning to end. A standout piece that shows not just skill, but real heart behind the camera.
A Dance
A good story on the issues of mental health. This short is effective in its storytelling. The audio needs some work in the beginning of the story. Let the argument be the star instead of the music to help drive home the struggles in the story. Cinematography has a strong use of well-framed and motivated shots. The Acting is very well done as well.
A Dance
Story was interesting. Please consider a tripod and better sound. Sound was hard to understand in places.